all I want is You
I close my eyes and see your ghost
even when I kiss them,
I close my eyes to dream~ Because
I close my eyes to dream~ Because
it is You trespassing my eyelids~ Because
it is You taking me beyond
I wish you'd drag me to your abyss and kiss me til I burn
~~
...how does it feel?
How does it feel to be a goddamn King in a forbidden realm?
what I want is the grip of Your hands
long fingers, like snakes, wanting to devour me
wanting to creep along my body-scratch it-hurt it...
...inflict the sweetest pain a woman could ever feel
I want your guns
your precious monsters
I want your darkness
your anger
your coldness
your sweetness
your fucking dont's...
I want it all
A passionate piece!
ReplyDeleteThis starts of gently then twists into deep passion - nicely done
ReplyDeleteHow does it feel to be a goddamn King in a forbidden realm?
ReplyDeletethat is a great statement...when i was younger i so wanted someone, i worshipped them and they just played me..great write and thanks for sharing with OSW...pete
One of the more love-honest poems I've read in a while. Effective work, imagery, etc.
ReplyDeleteA moving, honest piece. Enjoyed reading your poem.
ReplyDelete& THAT is why im in Love with You my Valerie!!! xox
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for all of your comments. You don't know just how inspiring they are to me. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteDear Lalicat
ReplyDeleteAll I want is you...
Perfect.. I enjoyed it...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
on my father's birth day.
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